Wednesday, 19 June 2013

LED TV - 55 fiction

'55 fiction' - this is something I came across recently. 'What is 55 fiction?' as the question popped up in my mind I searched online about this and found the result exciting - a fiction in just 55 words. Keeping this in mind I have tried something for the first time. Do let me know your views. 

LED TV (55 fiction)

He bought a new LED TV. 
He carefully unpacked it and was mesmerized by its sleek look. 
He plugged in the wires. 
He put the batteries in the remote control. 
He switched on the supply. 
He went back ten feet and sat on the couch. 
He pressed the ‘on’ button on the remote. 
Power gone!

Written by Ashwin Kumar

22 comments:

  1. hahahaha... nyc effort Ashwin... too good for 55...

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  2. hehe...similar to misfortune!

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  3. what a challenge ! very funny
    good text
    Françoise

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  4. a good one, given that it's your first of the kind....it has become a popular format now

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  5. good one.. a mixture of misfortune and 2-4? ;)

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  6. Clever! Lots of people don't realize how difficult it is to create a beginning, middle and end to a story with so little words. great job!

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    1. You're right, Vashti.. It's tough to write a 55 fiction :)
      I'm glad that you liked it :)

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